Personal Essays

1. The writer gave the idea of clothes prices, but says the you can write about anything you feel passionate about.
2. The author said to give statistics and facts, but also give different perspectives. For example, the writer says to give the reader insight on a personal moment and a wider perspective on that same thing.
3. One suggestion the author made was to make the essay personal, but not too personal.  Another suggestion was was to not rant, but relate your topic to the reader and how it correlates with the rest of the world. One more suggestion was to make sure your reader knows why you feel that way using personal stories and facts.

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